August 09, 2011 | | Comments 0

You Asked About: Cyber Addiction Articles

Steven asks…

Im a lil girl in middle school and can you plz spell check this and correct it? Also, tell me if its good!?

Would you ever put you or your family in a dangerous place, where they can get threatened or even bullied? If you are one of the million Americans who wouldn’t, then consider this article. This article will tell you why I say NO in allowing middle school students to access networking sites. A couple of examples are addiction, cheating, and even getting cyber bullied.
this is the first paragraph to my essay people. can annyone rewrite if its bad??? pLEASE

Chas answers:

Spelling is good. I would change a couple of examples to “networking sites, such as addiction…” and change the second “you” to yourself.

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